tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1226595656307156347.post6543294757512667228..comments2012-10-19T23:19:51.756+01:00Comments on Kat French: How much is too much?Kathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17241471777598194240noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1226595656307156347.post-57603024310378871442010-05-19T09:51:12.110+01:002010-05-19T09:51:12.110+01:00Hi Janette, good to see you.
I guess we will hav...Hi Janette, good to see you. <br /><br />I guess we will have to keep the phrase 'it's all in the execution' in mind on this one, there probably is no right and wrong answer is there? I've read modern heats with a lot, and i've read them with a little... I guess it's all dependent on each individual story really isn't it? <br /><br />xKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17241471777598194240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1226595656307156347.post-62770718347629600052010-05-19T00:59:49.233+01:002010-05-19T00:59:49.233+01:00Argh - my one sex scene is defiately not good then...Argh - my one sex scene is defiately not good then... Well have one and a half and implcations of lots of 'action' but not described...<br /><br />As Jackie said - if it adds to the growth and the sex changes the relationship then it's all good.Janette Radevskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16140603619822092121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1226595656307156347.post-60648224716580907332010-05-18T22:39:47.635+01:002010-05-18T22:39:47.635+01:00lol Joanne!
Too much, too little, we are the blind...lol Joanne!<br />Too much, too little, we are the blind leading the blind. :o)<br /><br />xKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17241471777598194240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1226595656307156347.post-24638397558670861132010-05-18T20:12:51.885+01:002010-05-18T20:12:51.885+01:00And now I'm worrying that the two scenes I'...And now I'm worrying that the two scenes I've got are not enough!!<br /><br />Good for Jack and Nancy running away with your ms and their passion :-)Joanne Coleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09495716093866749521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1226595656307156347.post-63712790063757253482010-05-17T21:27:35.777+01:002010-05-17T21:27:35.777+01:00Thanks Jackie... yeah, that does make sound sense....Thanks Jackie... yeah, that does make sound sense.<br />Hmmmm. Am going to go back now and think on that.<br /><br />Cheers m'dear!<br />xKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17241471777598194240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1226595656307156347.post-3195203754205595272010-05-17T21:04:49.336+01:002010-05-17T21:04:49.336+01:00Joanne, the sex should change the relationship in ...Joanne, the sex should change the relationship in some way and further the conflict. If you have a sex scene that doesn't change things or further the conflict then it's there just for the sake of it and you don't want that. Does that make sense?Jackie Ashendenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15564893115525415518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1226595656307156347.post-28944834133098192862010-05-17T20:16:44.610+01:002010-05-17T20:16:44.610+01:00Hiya Susan! Hope the revisions are going well.
5 ...Hiya Susan! Hope the revisions are going well.<br /><br />5 is *hopefully * the number for the completed manuscript, there are 4 at the mo with one in the pipeline for a little later. Fingers crossed, because I'm pretty sure that 6 would be pushing. !! lol<br /><br />xxKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17241471777598194240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1226595656307156347.post-12171493695591078902010-05-17T19:25:10.256+01:002010-05-17T19:25:10.256+01:004/5 sounds like a pretty good amount! How are you...4/5 sounds like a pretty good amount! How are you going to finish the story and have the big black moment though? Because they usually happen after another episode of bedroom entanglements, will that make it too many?Scarlet Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784722625468146993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1226595656307156347.post-87662456029050838832010-05-17T16:17:24.443+01:002010-05-17T16:17:24.443+01:00Hiya Rach,cheers chicken!
will have a happy troll...Hiya Rach,cheers chicken! <br />will have a happy troll through your blog. I have prob read it, replied on it and forgotten! lol<br />Well if you have 4, then 5 sounds not too outlandish no?<br />xx<br /><br />Hey Francine! Lovely to see you.<br /><br />How could anyone hate you as a blogger? I always read your posts with interest.<br />Thanks for your encouragement re: the lift scene, that one is DEF staying in! <br /><br />I don't belong to a crit group, but i do have a lovely writer friend who's also subbing to modern heat, and she's offered to read for me as soon as it's ready.<br />It's so kind of you to offer though, thank you. <br />It def helps having someone read doesn't it?<br /><br />xxKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17241471777598194240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1226595656307156347.post-86577100078703972010-05-17T15:18:51.836+01:002010-05-17T15:18:51.836+01:00Hi,
RE: how much is too much (sex)?
Hee hee, how...Hi,<br /><br />RE: how much is too much (sex)?<br /><br />Hee hee, how long is a piece of string?<br /><br />Seriously <>, the "lift" scene is obviously what got your entry noticed and gave someone at HM&B a buzz - same as it did us out here who are pushing for you to keep at it. <br /><br />Do you belong to a critique group? If not get another writer (you feel able to trust)to read it through and see what that person thinks. <br /><br />Love me or hate me as a blogger I'm not looking to steal plots - enough of my own to last me for years - I'm always game for a read.<br /><br />francinehvr@yahoo.com<br /><br />I won't take offence if you ignore this bit of my post. ;)<br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1226595656307156347.post-37817364759928439172010-05-17T15:18:34.000+01:002010-05-17T15:18:34.000+01:00LOL - I did a post about this a while ago! Sorry I...LOL - I did a post about this a while ago! Sorry I'm too knackered to go and look for it now but it shouldn't be too far into my archives if you want to hunt it down. There were some really interesting responses.<br /><br />My full sub (at last count) has four sex scenes - I did have five but I cut one cos it wasn't adding anything!Rachael Johnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12162767571439344710noreply@blogger.com